Criticism

Criticism

A Poem by Sam Freeland
"

could be your problem

"

If our goal is to criticize
the things other people do
It may be our own problems
not even knowing it is true

The world has survived
for many millions of years
Full of complex diversity
and animal-like fears

Now though we may hate
the choices others make
If its success they seem to have
come on, give them a break

Your wins and losses too
came from what you did
Always the best you could do
though being often like a kid

Stop acting judgemental
spend time trying to learn
The path others follow
is none of our concern

We cannot forsee the outcome
of what someone else will do
Just pray your God in Heaven
is still looking out for you

We all are unknowing
as to whether any belief is wrong
It could be only our mistake
in our own criticism's song

When what we do helps others
they will want to believe
That sharing in our happy group
will give blessings we all receive


8/23/10

© 2010 Sam Freeland


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Sam Freeland
Sam Freeland

Chocorua, NH



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