Shared Poetry

written by a superior reviewer

 

Never Ending Poem

 

This is a special poem

That I am sharing with you

Hoping you’ll add your own words

So that you can contribute too

 

The thoughts you write down today

Will be enjoyed in every home

With careful consideration

This will surely become a great poem

 

You should know of the reward

That you will likely receive

Knowledge and creativity

Is yours if you believe

 

The only rule there is

Requires adding some words here

The changes that you make

Should not be anything to fear

 

It is obvious that I like rhyme

Because it is easier to read

If you change a rhyming word

Success will be yours indeed

 

In case you wonder about my plan

There’s something else I must say

I truly enjoy sharing writing

As we do at WritersCafe

 

It’s a place where many enjoy

What others like to write

Poets from around the world

Flock to this Internet site

 

All that I hope will happen

Is seeing what you will say

As this poem continues to change

I hope it will brighten your day!

 

Author's Note

The rewite of my poem deserves being seen by the wonderful writers at WritersCafe. sam

Reviews

[Brown Bull]

And with no limit to our words
this poem will surely grow.
While others join our little quest
as down this path we'll go.

Oh, now I'm getting emotional, thinking about Dorothy and the lion and those guys on the yellow brick road... By the way, why didn't they have any cows in that movie? I'm going to call my lawyer.

[SusieQ]

Everything I learned, I learned from you! :)