Defining Success

Defining Success

A Poem by Sam Freeland
"

that gives satisfaction

"

Knowing real success

is based on what you have done

getting there with someone's help

is a practice one should shun

 

It leads to bearing false witness

and surely everyone will know

with this loss of real satisfaction

it is never the way to go

 

The truth of this dependency

may not be felt for many years

what will happen in the future

will be the likelyhood of tears

 

If whatever you plan to happen

leads to any kind fame

it will tarnish the dependant

who then will feel the shame

 

These problems can be avoided

when you grow by your own design

it may not happen so quickly

but it will make your effort shine

 

If you wonder how I know

of this mistake in what to do

just reflect on what happened to me

anyone will know it is true

 

Talk to those who found success

what they say will enlighten you

their plan depended on their own efforts

that is why there are so few

© 2009 Sam Freeland


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Sam Freeland
Sam Freeland

Chocorua, NH



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