Try This

for success

Money makes the world go around

or so the saying goes

How much you'll need in a lifetime

no one really knows

For richer or poorer

are words in a marriage vow

Is life easier without it

I really can't see how

To say you can live on love alone

some will say is not  fact

Commitment, trust and caring

are vital in your pact

If we're lucky to have a little

 of everything mentioned above

We'll walk through this world

forever growing in true love

Reviews

[richom]

Having just read "A Tip," i wanted to read more of your poems. This is a gem. Thoughtful and wise, with the plus that it is expertly rhymed and metered (the type of poetry that I most enjoy reading and writing). It is romantic to think that one can live on love alone, but sadly it can't survive without some amount of money.