The man of broken glass

Pinned to wall by broken glass,

losing myself ever so fast.

look at the man, ever so tattered,

the man of glass soon to be shattered.

stuck to this world on hopes and dreams,

soon to find out this world is so mean.

the pain , the dark, a place of strife,

will the man of glass end his life?

people see life, ever so swell,

but the man of glass only sees hell.

but who is the glass man, will he be known,

never, never, the glassmans alone.

Reviews

[Sam]

Thank both of you for the comments... haha id like to hear more of what people think lol

[falling_toxic_rain]

I like it...I guess I can kinda relate at this point if my life:/
would like to read more of your writing.

[sonny]

awsome writing