Hey God!

Few complains to God and that's all.

Hey God,
your people and your world,
perfectly perfect but imperfect,
blind with eyes open,
they consider things with eyes closed,

Hey God,
Where is love? The children ask
Where is peace? Every heart cries
Where is God? Everyone calls,
Where is honesty? Where is sincerity?

Hey God,
your people and your world,
the rich is getting richest,
the poor is getting poorest,
the cruel is getting cruelest

Hey God,
the evil is being practiced,
religion has turned into religions,
respect is lost,
money is god, money is all


Hey God,
where is the guideline?
what is the guideline?
what you have told us is not all,
tell us the new path,

Hey God,
your people and your world
like a symmetry of disturbed path,
a scene of terror,
a perfect error

Hey God,
I know you know all,
it’s you, who is giving chance
but till how far,
tell the innocent what you want. .

Please God
I know you are...

Author's Note

I don't know why I wrote this one. Literally I don't know. I'm not a big fan of God, neither of religions. I sometimes call myself hypocrite, uh I guess that's what I am. Anyways the poem, do let me know what you feel and think about it. Feel free to share your views. .

Reviews

[Renée]

Interesting..searching..

[Barbara Walker]

Many others are questioning the values of society and know we are not heading in a good direction. Welcome to the club!

[MOON]

I would like to think there is a higher power , but I doubt its in any of the religions around us. Man has used religion and God to kill each other . Sad we have little respect for Humanity . Thought provoking write.

[Pencrafter]

Thanks for the emotional and caring poem. It shows how you really care about the awful conditions in the world and the suffering many people have to endure. You ask "where is the guideline". It's in the Bible, where we are told what we should do and why conditions in our world are sad. I agree with you that the proliferation of religions has created a real mess, causing many to actually turn away from God. I like the way your poem makes simple statements and then poses questions, causing the reader to think. It's a good poem.

[Lily Mae]

We live in an imperfect world for sure.. I'm never sure of the rights and wrongs that we are suppose to live by...the code of life.. I just try to do best by me and all around me.. I ask God/Universe to guide me with grace and ease in all ways..xo Good write :) xo

[Pax]

hey my friend, first of all its nice to see your writing again..it's been long. and for the poem. Well I'm not a fan of God, to me his a friend or a higher being I respect the most..maybe your wishing to the higher being that there is still hope for man.

[Serena]

I love the poem. I'm not a fan of religion either, but I can relate to this poem very well. I find myself questioning these very question, but not asking toward "God".
100/100 :D