My Garden

I tried to hide myself from them but they are all I have now.

After many torturous days,

time is here to be with me,

with my friends,

with my lovers,

In my garden,

After nourishing them

I sat down on velvety grass,

starting again from where we left

sharing what is lost,

telling what is being found,

My friend Rose,

seems worried

looking and listening to me restless,

My love tulips, 

are humming

trying to distract me,

The humble jasmines, 

seem placid

leaning focused,

The naughty daisies, 

are tamed

hugging each other,

The sweet daffodils, 

are hiding tears

Ignoring respiration,

And I continued,

each flower,

each leaf of each tree,

coming closer,

to hold me, 

I stared and stared at the grass

from morning till sunset,

inhaling my friends essence,

feeling them,

telling them,

and 

I lay down quiet

near garden’s fountain

when I got tired of crying

I lay down in silence,

listening to the lullaby of breeze

and fountain, 

felt peace

as someone wants to take me

to somewhere lull

I lay down and I slept

unaware of myself, in truce

In my garden 

Author's Note

I've nothing to say about this one. :) Do let me know your views about it.

Reviews

[Amy R]

Absolutely beautiful!
I loved everything about this piece and also the way u format it.
keep it up! )

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a great piece if this is as your profile said that you are not so good at writing yet i can just imagine.Nice write

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very soothing. I have a great love of flowers. Each does seem to have its own personality as in this piece. I enjoyed your poem.

[Japanese Cherry]

This is beautiful... very lovely... I really liked the imagery used...
Wonderful job
And you've actually given me some inspiration for a drawing, so thank you for ending my drawing block :)

[Calibaster]

This is great! You have nothing to say, well I do! I really liked this, though at some places the rhythm seemed a little skewed. Overall, great job :)

[lee von cleef]

In truce, love to give myself a little Truce from me, Shouldn't be such a self critic but what else can keep me from growing into a sloth.?

[AYVID N]

I loved the way the subject becomes one with the most beautiful prizes of nature, the flowers! A very close to earth poem. I loved it.

[Mary Christabel George]

Maan, The format is impressive.
Keep it up.

[Courtney]

Fascinating,wonderful imagery

[LisaEve]

I liked it!!