Without You

You completed my existence then you went away, and I just got lost like you took away my soul with you.

My life has become a misery

this is what happens to me always,

 no one to blame

cause it’s no one’s fault

and you won’t know that my..

Life is again as it was

undesirable innocence and decency

but nothing is as it should be

there’s just loneliness

no one to talk, no one to share

but it’s all right, I can manage

Without you

I can subsist this life

It’s really hard to bear

but it’s all right, I'm calm now,

I fall when I walk

and there’s no hand to hold

but it’s all right, I’ll stand again

Without you

You took everything away

and left me on my own

but I’ll find something old

I cry and there’re sighs

a fine dripping of blood

but hey! I’m all fine with life

 without you

This all will end

and you won’t even know

because I tell you every time

That I’m happy

WITHOUT YOU

Author's Note

I don't know what I intended to write, a complain or some feelings which were getting desperate to come out, I wrote it just the way I feel, the very feelings. May be I've just got so much numb that I'm unable to realise anything, happiness-pain-smile-laughs, everything seems fake. I don't want her back now because I've lost her by telling the truth and I don't want her with a lie. I just know one thing there's no life now, this might sound lame but I don't see anything visible in my life any more. I loved her, I love her but there's something more important for her than my love. But I don't blame her any ways, she is right at her place. She said she loved me too and always will but..

Reviews

[Serena Clara]

I love your writing style. Just out of curiosity, a year on, how is this situation? This poem is one of such strength and despair that i fully relate to right now and your written it so beautifully and emotively. It really struck a chord with me and my current situation. So if you don't mind me asking, how relevant are these emotions to your life right now?

[Courtney]

They say that poetry is one of the best outlets to get through feelings. To me the poem gives off sorrow and strength. Good write.

[Kes]

This is such a great poem. It's really emotionally charged. I love it. :)
Sometimes numbness and detachment are more difficult to deal with than actual pain. They just suffocate you with the knowledge that you should be feeling something... The only emotions you can acknowledge are the ones triggered by your own mind, rather than outside events. It's tough, but you have to ride it out. There's no other choice.

"I fall when I walk
and there’s no hand to hold"
These two lines seemed to tumble off the page; they're crushing. So simple, but so poignant and painful.
Fantastically written.
K

[Barbara Walker]

In our misery, we still, tell the other person we are fine, we can get along without them, while our heart is breaking and nothing in life is beautiful, anymore. I don't know if we do this to ourselves because we don't want the other person to feel bad, or pride or our way of trying to heal and go on. Some pride in there I'm sure and so hurt, we can't admit it. Your words express your intent very well.

[Harishvarmaa]

poem with a poignant touch..."this all will end and you won't even know because i tell you every time that i'm happy without you"...love this:) I could sense the sadness of the author...good write:)

[Pax]

i really felt your sorrow, it seems to me its really a bad breakup. Keep strong.

[Eve]

So many people come and go in our lives, and this write captures the pain of someone leaving to find themselves, and someone being left behind, heartbreaking for sure, well done. ;)

[MOON]

Good write, life challenges.

[fragment mix]

Hey!! Good one. A lot real, all reality.