If I Were...

If I Were...

A Poem by Sally
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>< English 6th grade!

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 If I were a Corvette

I’d be fast sleek

And beautiful as I

Devour the road in front of me

I’d be like a silver

Dancing disco ball never

Resting. I’d just

Go

Go

Go

© 2009 Sally


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Sally
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At first, I was like, "If she was a what?! A freakin car?" But then I read the rest and it's pretty epic. It embodies the freedom some of us wish so earnestly to have. Keep being awesome!! >:o

Posted 15 Years Ago


cool. I really liked this. Great imagery and Short but Amazing, doesn't even matter how old you are girl, a good poem is a good poem that's all there is to it, keep writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Amazing poem for a 6th grader. Planning a road trip already. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 29, 2009

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Ey. :]]] I'm Sally. Age 13. Newly hatched teen! :D I love animals, the rain, spending time with my homies, the computer, anime, music, reading, drawing, coloring, painting, and the list could go on.... more..

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