I Cry- The Imprisoned Soul.....

this is a poem i based on the mood i am in this christmas as my emotions take a turn for the most depressing day or week of my life. i just write what i feel and am to big on commas and question marks etc. i hope you understand what i am trying to portr

I cry within the shell given to me, holding my soul in captivity. 

My own made up hell.

And as i watch people with their merry smiles and the joy that appears upon their faces. I look in disgust.....why do you smile - the world is hell, why shall you have joy when their is poverty and famine.

My emotions signify the 10 plagues of egypt - it starts....

Cries of pain, sorrow and longing, then a heart filled with anger, hatred, jealousy, and emptiness and finally death, darkness and judgement for i will be judged on the reason for my creation and why i deserve to enter the gates of everlasting peace.

I cry within. Only to find a longing never truly found and a soul that never regains its strength, i cry for the shell that imprisoned me. I cry......

Author's Note

this is a poem i based on the mood i am in this christmas as my emotions take a turn for the moet depressing day or week of my life. i just write what i feel and am to big on commas and question marks etc.
I hope you understand what i am trying to portry here. thank you for reading and leave loads of comments.

Reviews

[ved]

this poem is spectacular.