Can I make you feel better?

Can I make you feel better?

A Poem by Aki
"

It may be confusing..I just care about my Sissy.

"

It was hard..
Sitting there while you cried
Can I cry with you?
I couldn't do a thing,
I felt helpless
Tell me, what can I do?
I want you to feel better..
I hurt when you hurt,
You were hurting..
I knew it was going to happen
It all went wrong.
With such excitement
You told me "Purple!"
I didn't want to betray
So given "F****n' A."
Was that sarcasm..?
I listened to you walk through the door
You need to let it out
"Will you cry with me?"
Of course I will
Of course I did
Did you see it?
On the inside, I cried..
Could I do anything more?
Hurting with you,
I wanted to hurt those who hurt you
Breaking into Safeway for three boxes of HairDye
I wouldn't care if I was put in Jail..
Can I make you feel better?
I love you, too, Sissy.
That'll never change.
I'm glad you feel better.

© 2008 Aki


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I LIKE. i like a lot of things but this is really good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats what Im talkin about! Not giving a f**k and would be willing to go to jail, Awsome poem sweetie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aki
Aki

Magic-Lolli-Land, CO



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My name is really no concern of anybody. My alias is Aki, as if you couldn't tell. I live in a magical place with other bodies and our native language is Bullshit. :) I'm eighteen years old and live .. more..

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