Like A Fool

Just a short poem, written a few months ago.

I wish I could believe those words.
From day to day, you run away; unseen
love to you is few and far between

Like a fool
I sit, I cry, I wait
To be in your arms
Sleeping next to you
Caressing your body
Breathing your scent
You are mine...
Just for tonight, right?

It's been one year..
Like a fool
I sit, I cry, I wait..
On that bathroom floor
Just like every night..
Where are you tonight?

Time flies, as it always does.
Now I only see you once a week,
I still feel lucky.
Like a fool,
I sit, I cry, I wait..
Bleeding on that bathroom floor,
I wait for you

Tonight, I am a fool.
Waiting for your return,
It doesn't hurt, I promise
The feeling fades
The pure white..
Now it's a darker shade

Like a fool
I cried tonight
I bled tonight
Do you see?
Can't you see?
This is what you've done to me
I still wait..

Today, you are the fool
Breaking something so pure
Crushing something meant to cure
You fool, you killer..
You broke your guardian angel
 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Oh! This was really sad and overflowing with frustration and anger.It clearly shows how hard it is to believe that someone we love the most doesn't really care about us.And it's very hard to leave them and move on. We think we can't live without them. But after a while, we observe that life gets far more better that way.
I sincerely hope this is not written out of personal experience...
The poem is great, no doubt about it. The flow, the frame-work...everything is very well done.
Great Job!!

[Enigma]

Oh! This was really sad and overflowing with frustration and anger.It clearly shows how hard it is to believe that someone we love the most doesn't really care about us.And it's very hard to leave them and move on. We think we can't live without them. But after a while, we observe that life gets far more better that way.
I sincerely hope this is not written out of personal experience...
The poem is great, no doubt about it. The flow, the frame-work...everything is very well done.
Great Job!!

[Enigma]

Oh! This was really sad and overflowing with frustration and anger.It clearly shows how hard it is to believe that someone we love the most doesn't really care about us.And it's very hard to leave them and move on. We think we can't live without them. But after a while, we observe that life gets far more better that way.
I sincerely hope this is not written out of personal experience...
The poem is great, no doubt about it. The flow, the frame-work...everything is very well done.
Great Job!!