Brezzy

You can't make her bloom,

Whatever you say,whatever you do,

However you try to hold her up!

You can't make her blossom.

Glancing at her everytime,

You can weary her anytime,

In your fight for her,

Though she say a word so far

She won't colour-

No! You can't take away the fragrance of her

The one who can make her bloom,

He doesn't need to do anything

Once he look at her,

there is magic everywhere,

A breeze will give her life

& so she can break the gyve

Breath of his,

Make her wish,

To fly in the air,

Free from vice...

No,You can't make her blossom

Cause she's already bloomed

by an angel on the chariot...

Reviews

[Confuser]

I thought it was absolutely beautiful. From looking at your picture, you seem to be young. Quite a powerful piece of writing from such a young lady. Don't worry, I am a Mother & Grandmother. My name is DaleSpringsMitchum, if you use facebook - not a creap. Anyway, I loved the flow the imagery & message is beautiful. I cannot write poems about love and I so wish I could this is quite beautiful. I am voting for you to win a contest; that's how I got here and am so thankful.

[Sairee]

Thanks a lot for such a nice compliment ^_^

[Confuser]

You are welcomed. It it very good.

[anant mody]

cooll
keep up good work

fwlt.nic to read.ittt

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Keen observation of nature. well penned!!

[Sairee]

Thank you.. :)