Colour of Change!

"If you say, the colour of sky is yellow like an omlet,

i'll eat that with love..

If you say, the colour of river is red like wine,

i'll drink that with love..

that was a time i loved you,

unconditionally with my eyes closed..

Now i look clearly,

& i feel blue!!"

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

Nice poem on love and faith in love.
Now I look clearly and I look blue..
Is finely said.
Please do not write short form as "u" for you ...etc.This is a vast plateform of writers worldwide and meant for specially writings anf reviews. It is not a message but a poem..
Thanks for sharing so nice a poem!
Keep writing..

[Sairee]

Thank you..i'll try not to use shortcut forms :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome. I like your decision..
Good. Keep it up..

[Sairee]

hmm.... :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Very nice poem with hidden meaning nicely written. I think you like to eat thats the thing find a big omlet and wine.
I'm just kidding... nicely written.

[Sairee]

Thanks prabha :) but dts true, i really love to eat :P

[Prabha Salimath]

Hola yep, you are welcome.

[Sairee]

:) :) :) :) :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

smart work. good comparison. well ended

[Sairee]

Thanks nitesh :P