Set me free unbound

Just a flow of words, written by feelings rather than by a pen.

 

 

 

 

 

Set me free unbound

 

Set me free unbound from

 

As my pen flows on the paper with these few words..

 

I cant continue the write

 

Bitterness in my tongue

Dizziness in my head

Tears in my eyes

Pain in my legs

 

Prevented me from continuing

 

I felt my heart being squeezed

As I've never imagined it would be

 

I felt the pain in my chest

Asif am holding the mountains of the world

 

I felt that, though, I've used to think

Its only words to express

 

But today,

I realised the real feelings of it,

 

As my mind

As my heart

As my soul

As every single cell in me

Shouts

Shouts loudly

 

Set me free unbound

 

 

Author's Note

Some times, I just write directly without noticing how it may sounds like...
I was trying to write a poem of another form,
But these words just flew from my heart directly.
And I'm trying to share just wat i do really feel

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

This is a lovely poem. Free and sincere and true into all accounts. While reading your words I can almost feel and share with what you feel about... Surely sometimes we let our hearts speak and let it just flow. As for this one you have succeeded. You've written free, you've written good. You've been unbound. :)

[$êlvån]

gr8 one...loved it..and u said that you write from heart.same with me..and feel that its best because i loved reading this one..poems from hearts are meant for hearts..touched with few lines of your poem and wanna see more of this kind...keep it up

[Alex Vidmar]

This is amazing Natty. Absolutely beautiful. Honestly brought tears to my eyes. I love this.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Nicely written. A plea for freedom!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Thoroughly enjoyed...superb piece of free flowing writing :D

[Manpreet]

Is it you or me? I possibly could not differentiate this emotion. The feel in it is so intense and true beautifully expressed!!

[just is]

this is one powerful read here,
I like it, nicely expressed.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Set me free unbound"
hard to be free of ropes and rules. We may taste freedom for a moment. I like the desire and the goal of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thea]

The emotions in this poem flowed clearly and greatly...Well done!
:)))

[Ellen Brook]

I can really feel your "words straight from heart". Cherish your talent of poetry and nourish it. Good write!

[Hotwater]

That's the way to do it... sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't... this did.
*bird*