Set me free unbound

Just a flow of words, written by feelings rather than by a pen.

 

 

 

 

 

Set me free unbound

 

Set me free unbound from

 

As my pen flows on the paper with these few words..

 

I cant continue the write

 

Bitterness in my tongue

Dizziness in my head

Tears in my eyes

Pain in my legs

 

Prevented me from continuing

 

I felt my heart being squeezed

As I've never imagined it would be

 

I felt the pain in my chest

Asif am holding the mountains of the world

 

I felt that, though, I've used to think

Its only words to express

 

But today,

I realised the real feelings of it,

 

As my mind

As my heart

As my soul

As every single cell in me

Shouts

Shouts loudly

 

Set me free unbound

 

 

Author's Note

Some times, I just write directly without noticing how it may sounds like...
I was trying to write a poem of another form,
But these words just flew from my heart directly.
And I'm trying to share just wat i do really feel

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

This is a lovely poem. Free and sincere and true into all accounts. While reading your words I can almost feel and share with what you feel about... Surely sometimes we let our hearts speak and let it just flow. As for this one you have succeeded. You've written free, you've written good. You've been unbound. :)

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

let it free.........sometime feelings creates the magic that even a magician cannot create....:-)..................very nice lines...I like the flow and feelings in it :-)

[Tate Morgan]

Now that is a write i can feel Unusual for me to able to say that but true none the less

[Raven Starhawk]

Such a breathtaking display of words. You have managed to bundle a perfect package here.