Set me free unbound

Just a flow of words, written by feelings rather than by a pen.

 

 

 

 

 

Set me free unbound

 

Set me free unbound from

 

As my pen flows on the paper with these few words..

 

I cant continue the write

 

Bitterness in my tongue

Dizziness in my head

Tears in my eyes

Pain in my legs

 

Prevented me from continuing

 

I felt my heart being squeezed

As I've never imagined it would be

 

I felt the pain in my chest

Asif am holding the mountains of the world

 

I felt that, though, I've used to think

Its only words to express

 

But today,

I realised the real feelings of it,

 

As my mind

As my heart

As my soul

As every single cell in me

Shouts

Shouts loudly

 

Set me free unbound

 

 

Author's Note

Some times, I just write directly without noticing how it may sounds like...
I was trying to write a poem of another form,
But these words just flew from my heart directly.
And I'm trying to share just wat i do really feel

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

This is a lovely poem. Free and sincere and true into all accounts. While reading your words I can almost feel and share with what you feel about... Surely sometimes we let our hearts speak and let it just flow. As for this one you have succeeded. You've written free, you've written good. You've been unbound. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nice title and ending. Thanks for sharing

[Sahar moonlight]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

I adore the Nirvana in the end... you felt it so bright.
I love it you stap out of the rigid world and just dare to be you.
Many could learn from your insight on this one.

Well done sweety!

E.L.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very sincere and full of intensity..words speak the worth of feelings..loved it Natty ..thanks

[AK]

Wow! The poem was brilliant! I could feel the emotions you were trying to convey, the flow was absolutely stunning. Great write!

[reflectingus]

As I read this poem, I could actually feel my heart tightening, it's like...your poem just carried me away with the intensity. I'm not sure why, but I feel very attached to this poem, because I have felt this way so many times. And I truly admire the fact that this is coming from your heart. I mean, poetry is at it's best when it comes from the heart, and this poem is a lucid evidence of that. Seriously, this is amazing, 100/100 for making me feel this with you.

[Nima M]

It's really nice. I feel like that right now, except its my bladder telling me to set it free. I better hurry up and go.

[WinterIce<3]

LOVE IT!

[CourtneyShay]

love it

[msharma]

Lovely piece written good experimentation.