Unsaid Words

Unsaid Words

A Poem by Sahar moonlight
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It says it all...

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Words
Feelings may hurt
Soul may burn
Heart may stab


Words
Pain may heal
Senses may soothe
Sorrows may end


But
I was left with

Unsaid
Words

© 2012 Sahar moonlight


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Sahar moonlight
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Magic of the words,
so carefully you breed.

In this short poem,
this magic you have freed.



I really loved the emotion that reflects off from your writing. It is quite captivating. I couldn't help admiring the repeatition of "words" and the finishing "unsaid words". Classy and elegant!



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is what I call as short, meaty, concise and imbued. Right with emotions. Right with a heart. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! Amazing, intriguing, and absolutely stunning piece. I love how it's short, yet it says it all.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way you express huge things in these mere and small poems! keep it up! i especially liked this one - it's so subtle! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Words have great power. We need to be careful how we use words and action. Unsaid words do no damage. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good gear Natty... many a word left in the air.

*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Words always need to be used sparingly .. and if there are some left unsaid, let them be the ones that should never have been used anyway!

Much thought in this brief poem ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magic of the words,
so carefully you breed.

In this short poem,
this magic you have freed.



I really loved the emotion that reflects off from your writing. It is quite captivating. I couldn't help admiring the repeatition of "words" and the finishing "unsaid words". Classy and elegant!



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the unsaid words are carved in the stone like a statue. my best regards.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unsaid words lately shone with the beauty of your heart and feelings......
nicely written,and deeply touching....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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