Unsaid Words

It says it all...

Words
Feelings may hurt
Soul may burn
Heart may stab

Words
Pain may heal
Senses may soothe
Sorrows may end

But

I was left with

Unsaid

Words

Author's Note

Thanks for your reading, rating and reviewing.

Reviews

[Aravind]

Magic of the words,
so carefully you breed.

In this short poem,
this magic you have freed.



I really loved the emotion that reflects off from your writing. It is quite captivating. I couldn't help admiring the repeatition of "words" and the finishing "unsaid words". Classy and elegant!

[Amata Luna]

This is what I call as short, meaty, concise and imbued. Right with emotions. Right with a heart. :D

[Ami N.]

Wow! Amazing, intriguing, and absolutely stunning piece. I love how it's short, yet it says it all.

[Alex Vidmar]

Well done. :)

[Ellen Brook]

I love the way you express huge things in these mere and small poems! keep it up! i especially liked this one - it's so subtle! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Words have great power. We need to be careful how we use words and action. Unsaid words do no damage. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Hotwater]

Good gear Natty... many a word left in the air.

*bird*

[emmajoy]

Words always need to be used sparingly .. and if there are some left unsaid, let them be the ones that should never have been used anyway!

Much thought in this brief poem ..

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

the unsaid words are carved in the stone like a statue. my best regards.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

unsaid words lately shone with the beauty of your heart and feelings......
nicely written,and deeply touching....