Love Birds

Love Birds

A Poem by Sahar moonlight

A blue small bird
Looking at the world
With his curious blue eyes
Wondering what it may hold

 

A blue small bird
Who flies high everyday
Alone but happy
Living his own way

 

A blue small bird
Lives his freedom enjoyably
Watches 'love birds'
And giggles uncontrollably

 

A blue small bird
Under the moonlight
Heard a whine
In one endless night

 

The blue small bird
Lost his heart
With that painfull cry
And searched for what he heard

 

A green small bird
Drown in tears and fear
Sitting motionless
Desperate for her lost dear

 

The blue small bird
By trembled wings and smiling face
Held her up
And fell in her place

 

With a cheerful smile
She kissed him thanks and bye
Believing he's so strong
To fly out so high

 

He smiled back to her
Hiding his broken wing
And he waved bye, though
Pain is what he's feeling

 

After she moved away
Silence is what u'd hear
He just loved the feeling
Drowning in her tears

 

 

Although....
The green small bird
Would have stayed
With him there

 

If just....
The blue small bird
Mentioned how much
He purely loved her

 

 

But it was never the end

As tears were soaked in the ground

And My small blue bird

Will once again

Fly around

Free unbound

© 2012 Sahar moonlight


Author's Note

Sahar moonlight
I Dedicate this poem to my Friend.
I wrote this for him.
I hope he'll feel peace in his heart and soon.


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beautifully written......

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sweet, love it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww this is so sweet! Never thought of two birds falling in love, this was the adorablest thing. The picture just completes the piece perfectly, love the story told, and love is in the air ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cute and LOVEly piece of work! You must admit you're a talented poet! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH wow I love this, the colors used make the write stand out even more.
This is wonderful. Love the emotions that tug. awesome write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVE how you used the colors!
this was a gorgeous poem, I enjoyed it alot, you have such amazing talent, don't ever give it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The "If"s in life always seem to get in the way of true love...~ This was beautifully depicted...and I loved the subtle use of the blue and green colors in this piece. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So precious as the metaphor for true love can be taught through the act of a small blue bird. A great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So nice. :) A very cute yet sad poem. I really hope that your friend will feel better soon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 30, 2012
Last Updated on May 8, 2012
Tags: love, fear, hiding, birds

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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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