A Drop of Rain

 

 

 

 

A drop of rain
              from a high place
                       dancing down its way
                                to find what will embrace

 

A drop of rain 
               wants to discover
                          the secret of where
                                           its dropping over

 

A drop of rain
   her smooth cheek it touches
                    mixed with salty drops
                             its sweetness it loses

 

A drop of rain
      was the nearest
                and came to know
    hidden secrets even from the dearest

A drop of rain
  though vanished away
                vanished knowing
                             what she'll never say

Author's Note

Thanks for everyone who reads, rates and reviews

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

Aww, this has really touched my heart. Partly for being drawn in the rain and partly for understanding what the person in this poem feels. I can see every picture. Hear every word. Feel every rhythm and share in the feelings that you placed in here. This is not just a beautiful piece, this is a great piece in the depths of a writer's heart and mind.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A lovely poem...excellently written :)

[Raven Starhawk]

This has a elegant format. It feels like I am stepping down stairs to reach a bottom that will prove most intriguing.

[stars are far]

This is so nice piece :D
I love it indeed .. keep it up :D