The Dice Man

The Dice Man

A Poem by Sahar moonlight
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Thats about a man who choose his actions by a dice. Putting different options which varries between silly acts to serious and dangerous ones. And let the dice controls his choices.

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My life
Rolls and rolls

With your rolls


No goal no destiny
 
You're my master and you i obey

With your six faces

You completely control my day

 

Door of freedom

You opened to me

Purified my soul

And set me free

 

My heart you cleared

My soul you cheered

My loneliness has disappeared

My boredom you sheared

 

With your choices you owned me

 


With one

You gave me fun

Alone you sent me

Enjoy my life and experience and see

 

With two
I had no clue

That to danger you sent me

And a subversive person you made me

 

With three

From myself you free

Make me a noble man you decided

To give my best you guided

 

With four

You gave me more

Licentious and reckless

Imprudent and careless

 

With five

You made me strive

Working hard

And moving forward

 

With six

Choices swing and mix

To roll you again you chose

And with more options my life flows

 

My life
Rolls and rolls

With your rolls

 

I am the dice man

© 2014 Sahar moonlight


Author's Note

Sahar moonlight
Inspired by the novel 'The dice man' by 'Luke Rhinehart'

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Oh beautiful, it's like the feeling of being Caged, within the rutine of life, and all together what makes a regular day so boring, I wrote a poem about this too, for a friend who felt the same pretty much like what you're writing about now, " Caged in You" it's called, what a wonderful write here, such dept, and truth, and honesty. Thanks!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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..This was amazing to read. great writing skills. Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm speechless... great, really great

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh WOW, this one tickled my fancy,
This is totally amazing!!
Loved the 1st stanza so much.
Awesome writing skills here
I also loved your creativeness.
Keep writing always : )

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this.
Really keep writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely amazing Natty! Perfectly written and this has a truth that rings around it :) Well done!

Alex

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that left me speechless!! Its really cool, and so intricately woven into one amazing poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! And I have the pic on my phone lol, I'm kind of a D&D nerd. But this was amazing, I'll have to read the novel xD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 10, 2012
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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



About
Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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