Is This Me?

An isolated island is my place

A moonless night is where am I

A yellow paled flower is my face

In the shade of dead grass I lie.

 

A ghost hunted cemetery is my heart

A gloomy sky is my soul

A dried fruit is my body

tasteless as a whole

 

Frustrated

Devastated

Dejected

Downhearted

 

Thats what you made me

 

 

But for you to know

I wont stay so low

 

Hope I'll see you soon

With every shining star with the moon

 

Faith I'll find you for sure

A fake smile is my way to cure

 

Thank you for what you done

Tried to destroy me...

But I AM NOT THE ONE.....

Author's Note

I am not a professional.
I just try to pure my heart by writing out and words flow alone.
I like to let my feelings flow alone though sometimes it makes my poem weak, but i dont like to change in it...

Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.
Thanks for the encouragement

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

well you needn't be a professional to write a poem...what you need are emotions...technical clarity will come with time...and I think you have done a perfect job..."An isolated island is my place
A moonless night is where am I
A yellow paled flower is my face
In the shade of dead grass I lie.
A ghost hunted cemetery is my heart
A gloomy sky is my soul
A dried fruit is my body
tasteless as a whole"-the rich metaphor you used just enhanced the visages you painted!

[Kim's Poems]

A ghost hunted cemetery is my heart
A gloomy sky is my soul
A dried fruit is my body
tasteless as a whole

I really LOVED this part, This is amazing.
Enjoyed this write.

[Anna Ivanova]

There are no professionals. Just hearts and souls trying to live. You've done so bravely.

[Julia Mancini]

Trust me, this piece said, "Pure Heart". Your feelings and emotions were shown through each word. It is so sad, but so well written. Well done,
~Julia

[Alex Vidmar]

Awwwww.... :( this one is so sad... Yet I can relate to it so well. It is very very well written Natty. Keep it up! This one would make a great song :)

Peace.

Alex