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There It Goes

There It Goes

A Poem by Sahar moonlight
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Whats how i imagine things :)

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Resting in infinite darkness
A full silver moon shimmers
Shining beams reach trees top
Forming shadows over rivers

Rivers flow singing a lullaby
That echos in my ear
Peace and bless
That's what i hear

As mists shroud the moon
Hiding its mysterious paths
Trying to stared through it
My heart collapses

As i glimpse a shadow of a smile
And a whisper in my ear
I heard it saying
Stay here with me for a while





© 2012 Sahar moonlight


Author's Note

Sahar moonlight
Thanks for your reading, rating and reviewing. :)

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JC
I can sense your poetic heart in this, it is so serene and beatific, I want to be there, you brought me there, you have that beauty in you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review ^_^
firstly you should take the D off STARED in the 3rd verse...but apart from that, and I know all about typos...I make loads.....It is a fine and relaxing poem that takes the reader on a gentle journey

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. Thanks for posting it

Posted 11 Years Ago


A splendid read and write. Shokran Jazeelan for penning...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

11 Years Ago

shokran jazeelan for passing by ^^
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Ma Alfi salama...Al Afo...:)
Lovely words your have written...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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i read a lots poem like this before
poems good. but just the same..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pretty senary

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
very serene and pretty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A quiet poem of quality,written with insight and talent. I really like this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very nice. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on October 26, 2012
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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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