No words To express

Knowing that one of my teachers passed away, i feel really bad. And as usual writing cools me somehow. Being awake since last 30hours, my mind isn't stable and my words aren't arranged.

White to black
In one moment
Happiness to sorrow

Memories
Just return
As you leave
And never come again

In minds and hearts
Always there

Sleepless  nights
A  tear  escapes
 
 As music plays
And your memory occupies my mind

Author's Note

I wanted to share despite the fact that it isnt written properly.

Reviews

[The XYZ Writer]

A beautiful poem that really does express emotion even though it isn't written the way you did before. I especially loved that "memories just return.." part. Funny how the moment you find out a person you know is dead, that's when you remember all the memories you shared with the person. One moment, happiness to sorrow. So fast things can happen.

My condolences for your loss. I hope you feel better soon. And this is an amazing poem. :)

~XYZ

[Ami N.]

It's written beautifully Natty!
I'm sorry about the loss :(

"In one moment
Happiness to sorrow"

No doubt, that is so true.

Keep writing~

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks Ami

[Leslie Philibert]

It is writen properly and it is a fine poem, good job.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thank you Leslie

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Catches the moood correctly with its tone...
and so true...one moment it takes..happiness to sorrow...

sorry for your loss

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks Yas

[Sarah]

Its really powerfull. Sad but very afective.
Really good. Sorry about your teature.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks Sarah!

[Sarah]

welcome. :D