New World

Our world is so amazing, but people cant see that due to the situation people held this world to show as... To live properly, one should see the beauty of the world ...

I opened my eyes
To a wonderful world

I've walked through jungles
I've seen green paradise
Trees flow and dance
Flowers shine and rise

I've sat there beside the sea
Blue shining sheet
Hiding endless secrets
As waves, the shore, meet

I've looked up to the sky
Shining stars twinkling bright
The moon sleeping among
Giving sliver light in that night

I've stared at the cities
High buildings crossing the clouds
People busy everywhere
Moving there in and out

I tried looking in their hearts
White shining, black darkening
No way to understand their truth
Mysterious and feelings were hiding

I had a wish in a moment
People look around
And see and find in this world
The magic I have found

Be part of it
And be clear as it

For a better world
Full of peace I pray
Be honest and nice
That's the only way  

Author's Note

My poem is to show the beauty of the world... thats why i've uploaded it with a video... I hope you enjoy...
Any critic, comment or idea is much appreciated .

Thanks to all

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"For a better world
Full of peace I pray
Be honest and nice
That's the only way "
I have the same hope and prayer. Peace would be nice. Hope for a good life for all children. I pray daily for a better world. Thank you for the hopeful and beautiful poem of hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks alot

[Nath]

Wonderful poem - it is true, the world is beautiful, you just have to look and see it. Even if some things need to be changed, we shouldn't forget the wonders we can see anytime if we only open our eyes. Great video, too, well, just overall brilliant!

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks :)

[Nath]

Welcome! :-)

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine, optimistic poem with a really big subject, which makes me thing that poetry can have the function to look at things that are so big and obvious they are easy to overlook. Very good work.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thats right, we can swim so deep in poetry :) thats what i feel!. Thank you

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

So wonderful to see the positive focus on what is good of this world. The world itself is a wonderful place, what is defiled is man mad. Great right loved it from beginning to end! 100%

[Sahar moonlight]

thanks for ur nice comment :)

[Ami N.]

No doubt one of my favorite poems on here. Very well written :)

*100*

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks a lot :)

[Ami N.]

OMG Wow! I just saw the video (I don't remember seeing it in the author's note when I was reviewing earlier). Beautiful video! It complements the poem wonderfully.

Really really really love it.

You're very talented Natty~
Keep writing!

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks Dear, I'm just growing up within you :)