New World

Our world is so amazing, but people cant see that due to the situation people held this world to show as... To live properly, one should see the beauty of the world ...

I opened my eyes
To a wonderful world

I've walked through jungles
I've seen green paradise
Trees flow and dance
Flowers shine and rise

I've sat there beside the sea
Blue shining sheet
Hiding endless secrets
As waves, the shore, meet

I've looked up to the sky
Shining stars twinkling bright
The moon sleeping among
Giving sliver light in that night

I've stared at the cities
High buildings crossing the clouds
People busy everywhere
Moving there in and out

I tried looking in their hearts
White shining, black darkening
No way to understand their truth
Mysterious and feelings were hiding

I had a wish in a moment
People look around
And see and find in this world
The magic I have found

Be part of it
And be clear as it

For a better world
Full of peace I pray
Be honest and nice
That's the only way  

Author's Note

My poem is to show the beauty of the world... thats why i've uploaded it with a video... I hope you enjoy...
Any critic, comment or idea is much appreciated .

Thanks to all

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"For a better world
Full of peace I pray
Be honest and nice
That's the only way "
I have the same hope and prayer. Peace would be nice. Hope for a good life for all children. I pray daily for a better world. Thank you for the hopeful and beautiful poem of hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks alot

[Manpreet]

Beautiful Poem sharing today's truth! Great write!

[Priscilla Sayers]

A beautiful piece. A wonderful array of description and an optimistic outlook!

[Tate Morgan]

natty one of the people i like alot i thank you for this

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks :)

[Allen Smuckler]

We really do have to look beyond the everyday chaos, hatred, trials and tribulations. Seek the positive and the beauty and the hell with the rest. start with us and perhaps a movement. Tediously slow, I know...but it's a start.
You've captured much of what the world needs in an optimistic, hopeful and inspirational way. Pay it forward, Natty.
Beautifully written
allen

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks a lot Allen!

[Michael Thrower]

This is a very nice, beautiful, and sweet poem :) I can tell you put effort into it, and it's a good length.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks alot Michael! :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The world is sure beautiful, just have to look for it sometimes...
love your poem :)

[Sahar moonlight]

Thank you :)

[Mockingbird]

it's so easy to get too preoccupied with our problems that we take for granted the loveliness of our world. we should be aware that we are surrounded by nature. great poem.

[Sahar moonlight]

You're absolutely right! Thanks :)

[Hotwater]

Top draw, Natty... for me ... your best to date, very well done indeed!

*bird*

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks alot :)

[Raven Starhawk]

This poem intrigued me very much. We can invite a new world in or shut it out. Your words help me to draw near a serene possibility that even I am sure can be of grand importance and I apologize if I don't make much sense. I am so involved in the words you penned that they are still stirring around in my brain.

[Sahar moonlight]

I do absolutely understand what you mean... And i do agree...There is always a chance to look around in a positive way. Thank you