Once Again

After five years passed, i am once again beside my window looking at the moon. That was the result

As I sit here
Beside my window
On a black chair

I hear the clock
Four rings
The time it shares

A gentle breeze
Plays with my hair
Around my face it flows

I take a look all around
Black sky
Hundreds of stars glow

Then I look back again
At my moon
So high, so bright

I smile
As I finish my poem
Under the moon light

The moon was so far from my window, but i tried to catch a photo

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

I really like this, pure, wry, full of truth, nice work.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks Leslie!

[Tate Morgan]

Now that i liked

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks , am glad to know that

[Tate Morgan]

I wont lie to you I did like it and Im a tough sell lol

[Sahar moonlight]

WoW, That sounds even more important to meee

[Amila Jay]

Writing under a moon lit night is very awesome .. Lovely write :))

[Sahar moonlight]

you're absolutely right, you should try it too :) Thanks alot!

[Amila Jay]

Sure thing!! You're welcome :))

[Owlgirl]

Writing by the light of the moon is a great joy and treasure, I love how you put it into such beautiful words and did it justice :) Awesome poem

[Sahar moonlight]

yea it was amazing writing under the moonlight... was the only source of light and all was charming... Thanks !

[Mockingbird]

the moonlight can be very inspiring. it's nice it inspired you to create art. great poem.

[Sahar moonlight]

You're very right, the moonlight is very inspiring :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description of place and thoughts in the poem. I did like the picture too. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks for your valuable comment

[Ezekiel Silver]

Vivid poem! I like the word intensity and imagery to it. Good job!

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks for you :)

[Sahar moonlight]

I'm glad you did dear, it's one hour earlier here, but I felt the same when I posted my last one... bliss, pure bliss,

E.L.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks :)
Its very true

Yes, I loved the moment in time... so Thank You :)