Once Again

After five years passed, i am once again beside my window looking at the moon. That was the result

As I sit here
Beside my window
On a black chair

I hear the clock
Four rings
The time it shares

A gentle breeze
Plays with my hair
Around my face it flows

I take a look all around
Black sky
Hundreds of stars glow

Then I look back again
At my moon
So high, so bright

I smile
As I finish my poem
Under the moon light

The moon was so far from my window, but i tried to catch a photo

Reviews

[Ami N.]

Wow. You captured the moment beautifully~

[Sarah]

Its amazing well done :D

[Sahar moonlight]

thanks :)

[.]

I smile
As I finish my poem
Under the moon light
I had never thought of that! Great rhyme and rhythm.
100/100

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks :)

[.]

you're welcome

[the_stoic]

exquisite is the word !

[Sahar moonlight]

thanks :)

[Brittany]

I liked how you presented this little moment.

[Manpreet]

Beautiful!!! I like you calling it "My moon" very interesting somewhere you named your inspiration!! Beautiful work indeed!!

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks alot :)

[Sami Khalil]

Ah , the beauty of the night with the moon.
Well written.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks,
Absolutely, moon is the most beautiful thing on earth ( although its not in earth)

[Raven Starhawk]

I can say I have actually done this before. Listening to the things around me and just watching the sky...all the while emotions are being processed. But anyway it was well penned.

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks Raven :)

[Dean Kuch®]

Strong feelings, written with even stronger words!
Nicely done...

[Sahar moonlight]

Thank you Dean!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wonderful imagery captured....i felt it reading it :)

[Sahar moonlight]

Am glad to know that :)