To-Do List

To-Do List

A Poem by Sagemind
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A fictional to do list.

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To-Do List

 

Go to see my bud Cody

Put the gifts under the tree

My braces' wires need a change

This day looks to be quite strange

Put some ointment on my cuts

Give some dog chow to the mutts

Reply back to all my mail

Go and try to learn some Braille

Wrap the presents for my friends

They will cost a lot to send

Do odd jobs for lots of cash

Get recipe for taters mashed

Looks like I've got a lot to do

And I just went and shared with you

I think I might now need some help

And now I'll let out a huge YELP!

© 2008 Sagemind


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Interesting concept. It seems like it could be a really good and inspiring poem. The main thing I see is that it seams unorganized or rather each line takes on an individual stand instead of helping the synergy of the poem. I never would have thought of a to do list poem though, awsome

btw yay for braille. Go Team! :)
I know braille so I can talk hehe

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 12, 2008

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Sagemind
Sagemind

North Las Vegas, NV



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