Confusion

Confusion

A Poem by Sagela
"

Just trying to sort myself out

"

I just got over with him.

He was so scary.

Constant phone calls.

Constant texts.

Threatening.

Abusing.

Obsession.

Thank God he lived somewhere else.

 

Now the new guy.

Just as far away.

Just as cute

If not cuter.

Very sweet.

Very nice.

But I am afraid.

Because of the other guy.

 

Should I go for him?

Should I get somebody out here?

Should I just keep it open?

Or exclusive?

I don't know.

 

Maybe a break?

No.

I miss affection.

What to do

What to do

© 2009 Sagela


Author's Note

Sagela
This was again right off the top of my head in the middle of the night. Be honest with me on your opinions about it.

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There is a lot of thought and content in this short poem. Loads of questions to be answered from within. Good luck with that. Sounds like long distance relationships, which I think would be difficult, especially if not started face to face.
As for the poem, I like it. The conflict within, the yearning for affection and attention.

Very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is a lot of thought and content in this short poem. Loads of questions to be answered from within. Good luck with that. Sounds like long distance relationships, which I think would be difficult, especially if not started face to face.
As for the poem, I like it. The conflict within, the yearning for affection and attention.

Very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, Nice opening of your emotions. Great poems only come from an honest heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


An old builder`s adage seems approprate.
"Measure twice, cut once " .

Time is the measure of all things.

If you like someone, take the time to check
him thoroughly before you make a move.
You need to read people better before you
make that cut.

Excellent poem !

My rating ------ 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


It wasn't in the middle of the night...more like 2 in the morning lol

p.s.

That GUY is CREEPYYY

Posted 15 Years Ago



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