What Is The Point?

One of these thinking days...

What is the point of Harmony

When not one person wants peace?

What is the point of peace

When there is nobody trying to cooperate?

What is the point of cooperation

When everybody is so stubborn?

What is the point of stubbornness

When everybody wants the "best thing done"?

What is the point of the "best thing done"

When people only think "what's in it for me"?

What is the point of thinking "what's in it for me"

When the goal is to ultimately help humankind?

What is the point of helping humankind

When we give in to our flaws?

It is only human nature.

Author's Note

This is my personal favorite of mine.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such a deeply moving, introspective write. You make me wonder what's worth pursuing and what might just be a waste of time. Brilliant, deep write.

[Tate Morgan]

A interesting idea in the way it is structured I have never seen one like it I think it inspired good job I tried a new way on one called Mariann you might like

[Dianah]

A very cleverly written poem which makes us all question ourselves. I like the use of rainbow colours too, like there is hope after a storm. Excellent piece of writing.

[StoryTailor]

I agree. It has a good point. It's written well. This is a job very well done.

[V. Lucien Maier]

good topic, the formatting with colors again takes away from the power of the piece.
Other than that is a nice piece, although I may not personally agree with the message.

[changeofseason]

This poem speaks a lot of truth. I like how one question leads to another and how we ultimately accept our flaws.

[Zarathustra]

This is amazing, Seriously!
I was taken from the first line and enjoyed going for the ride.

[Ayumi Minji]

I love this poem especially the lines: "What is the point of peace When there is nobody trying to cooperate?" that line is soo true. That's why this world never gets peace because people never cooperate. but, great poem, love it! :]

[NxSoulja]

gud werk. i thnk dis expresses our community today