Inside my paper cup

I took a sip from my paper cup

I suppose even a great man could give it up

so i dropped a seed ito my paper cup watched 

as the flowers rose to the summer sky

I suppose even a healthy man can get upset

well the flowers grew inside my paper cup

until a snail came and ate them all so i had to start again

i dropped a feather into my paper cup

saw a bird fly out

then i tried to figure out something clear to say

when i did i said it into my paper cup

then out came your voice

i told you the choice was yours

you said find me in the ocean air

so i caught some in my paper cup

 

Reviews

[aqua]

hey you should read cities and thrones and powers by rudyard kippling hes kinda like you just in a form!

[Marlena]

Awesome, very cool.

[Last Lying Look]

This is really neat and rather unique.
Excellent write!
-Elissa :)

[Ben]

This is a very good poem. Just a few mistakes you might want to change: A few of your 'I's aren't capitalized. Good job, keep it up!

[wolfshrew]

i could see this being expanded, it is very interesting.

[mmzx]

i like your poems. good job. ;D