Black Hole

This is what one book did to me.....and the odd thing is....I still love it

I read one page

And I'm falling

I feel like everything

Is being jerked away

from me

I can't breath

I can't see

Where am I going?

What am I doing?

Have given up on life?

I don't know

I just don't

I feel like a drug addict

I can't put the book down

It's sucking me in

A little at a time

I'm bored of my real life

I want to get out

But I don't know how

Is this normal?

I dopn't know

Suddenly the only thing

That seems interesting

Is the book.

 

Reviews

[JenLyn]

I found the poem a bit boring, you should do a re-write and try to use some imagery etc. in it, spice it up a little. Like you could say something that with every page you turn the book swallows a little bit more of your soul, my life is being taken from me, can't breathe or see, something like that. I know you're writing about a book but there's no reason that it can't be interesting. You can write, you just have to find the correct words. Please keep writing, practice makes perfect.