Neutral

Neutral

A Poem by Sage of the River
"

just my feelings

"

I feel like i'm in an awkward position...

Like someone who doesn't know what to do or say.....

Or what to feel....

Maybe I'm just bored...

Maybe I'm just tired......

I guess I really don't know......

I feel like i'm in a glass enclosed box.....

With only room for one step....

I'm watching a huge crowd of people.....

And yet I haven't a clue what they're talking about.....

Or could it be that I'm just not in a mood to talk about it or join in.....

I don't know....

I really don't....

© 2010 Sage of the River


Author's Note

Sage of the River
My first writing on here. This is basically what I'm feeling. I thought of this one right off the spot. So ya it may not be good

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Hmm...confusing... Didn't yosay you always wanted to like...make more friends? To get outta the shadows? How come your saying that you don't wanna join in?

Posted 14 Years Ago


You know how annoying this "............." is? Very. Heres a suggestion: put more sentences together. Example

I feel like i'm in an awkward position,

Like someone who doesn't know what to do or say

Or how to feel.

Maybe I'm just bored, or

Maybe I'm just tired.

I guess I really don't know.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 12, 2010
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I guess I have 2 sides. I have a positive, happy, outgoing side and a negative, dark, careless side. I guess sometimes they clash. But I always try to take pride in who I am. Even though I carry the b.. more..

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