Your Eyes.

Everytime I looked into your eyes, I found something divergent, something dark, something to yearn for,
Yet the fascinating thing was that intimacy, warmth in your eyes.
I may not delve deeper into your eyes again, but doesn't matter, I'm already lost deep in the limbus of your eyes, perplexed.
Does that mean that I want to come to light ?
No, no.
That's my peaceful place. I would love to stay zillion years, if you permit, my love. �'�

Author's Note

Pls do share ur feedback. As it's my first writing.

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

They say the eyes are the window to the soul, and who is to argue with that? Getting lost in a beautiful pair of eyes is pleasure and a privilege, I would say. A warmly written poetic piece.

[Neville]

the eyes have it don't they just .. the gateway to the soul .. and where would we be, other than lost without them .. well poemed my friend and muchly enjoyed :)

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thank you Nev,, for lovely review.
Best,
S

[Neville]

welcome as always .. always a pleasure & always mine :)

[Fran Marie]

the eyes seem
to always tell the
story deep within
this is so nicely
penned

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thanku Fran for checking in!
Best wishes
Saga

[Dave Brown]

nicely done
I guess the reality is that with these masks everyone is wearing, there is little else to look into

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Rightly said by u Dave. Atleast eyes give those vibe, u cannot deny completely
Thanks for taking your time to read.
Best wishes
Saga

[Chris Shaw]

It:s all in the eyes. The mirrors of the soul. You can tell a great deal about someone by looking directly into their eyes. That's if you dare. Nice little read.

Chris

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Yes, that's right. As they say, eyes say it all.
Thanku for reading, this is my first ever writing. 💜

[Chris Shaw]

Now you have started, you just have to keep going:) Good luck.

[Betty Hermelee]

The eyes can be so expressive that it’s the first thing one delves into
And desires to stay forever, very nice write
Best
Betty

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thanku for the review.
Much love

[John the Baptist]

Be careful. A zillion years can end suddenly in one bad weekend.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

That's right sir,
Perception is a big thing, what we may call a zillion years, might be a week to someone.