read this.

i am taking a bath and i am now, madonna.

i am taking you to my bath and letting the flags of yours arms, drench over me.
you wish you are water and soap and you wish you are,

not the scissors pressing the
stone of my teeth,
cutting the fibres so, and so
and not the flash
killing me, so  and so.

but you are not the man to address me in parcels
and ribbons
and inside of the spritz
of the blooming hurt.

you are elvis and i am madonna and we are taking a bath, you are flying high and i am still alive.

and it is 7am and we are both water and soap. it is 7am, draping my legs over you as curtains,
it is 7am and i love you a lot.

Author's Note

complicated, naked, in love, happy. the picture just rules doesnt it?

Reviews

[Collect-Eye]

sorry it took so long to review this...
it's so involved and it's depths I just have trouble putting proper words to.
it just invokes so many sensual thoughts...
it's a struggle to get through the middle two parts, in life I mean, though it did require several readings to fully grasp, as it should be w/ any amazing piece of writing..
I mean to say, that's what makes it so amazing..it's so ironically less about the characters people see you as, and so much more about just getting involved to a place of such intimacy and oneness.

you let go of things and communicate and it keeps you from projecting your crap onto the other person you care about..when it seems so easy to be like everyone else and use that hurt as an excuse to stop living, and then love either dies or stagnates.

But even then it's just mulch for another time, another place...

but yea I'm glad for this special piece and everything it means..I'm glad it's alive and growing

now this makes quite a statement.

you can be your own royal couple with that special someone.

wow!