oooooooh myyyyyyyyyy Cat Power - metal heart is so good to type to.

You will find me, catching butterflies
along the vines of washing lines.
Draining the silver words from your eyes and

oh your words

are breaking the bones of the feathery aligning my mind
and finally, finally
germinating the wet leaves
that used to be you and I.

Author's Note

For the most special man in my life. Thank you for blowing doubt like cobwebs. You are a gift to me. <3

Reviews

[papaed]

adoration, culmination, erudite alliteration, simple, yet all-encompassing images that stroke my mind with warm affirmation of the continuing cycle of star-crossed joinery that keeps our kind in this universe
Thank you Safrina,
Peace and Love,
papaed

[Collect-Eye]

The eloquence of this is just breathtakingly effortless..I mean the last stanza..the resolve turns and pirouettes so gracefully..the meaning and the phonetics are just in perfect unison..

I thought it would be good to revisit this tonight and finally post a review, as I'm feeling extra lucid atm...

IDK this is just a billion fractal haikus, all the concentration of hours or even decades or eons of concentrated zen meditation energy rolled into a stretched and coiled moment, a hyperbolic awareness contained in that single perfect kiss..

Your man seems to be as blessed as he is a blessing..

so yea, try perusing my groups or other groups at random and enter this piece where it fits and get feedback...these are mine [tho I'm not very active like iI should be]
http://www.writerscafe.org/invisiblegenius/groups/

Mark was blown away by the name "butterfly army" as a band name, btw...I think I'm gonna hold onto it for a while though and let it germinate, though..