Wrote in my new writing book haha :)

Wrote in my new writing book haha :)

A Poem by Safrina
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...I just breathe cool, right?

"
I'm pregnant with inflammation
all your heads in the basin;
soaped and groped with XO,
dancing so golden
drying out, your scalp
and folding, your arms.
and seeing you there
with leaves for lips
and lingered marks
for kisses
makes this inflammation tear.

© 2009 Safrina


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Wow, this is really good, your poems are so well structured with a natural flow which makes for great reading. Love the lines 'and seeing you there/with leaves for lips' - fantastic work!

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Safrina
Safrina

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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