Cake Date

Feminist resistance over a slice of cake. A short story in prose.

"Just a coffee for me today, I'm trying out Kim's new regimen, I will be turning my body into a fat burning machine, after all, we are only two cake dates away from a pooch pouch. The first step is to comitt to a daily routine starting each day with a glass lemon water".

"And what is the second step?"

"the second step will be published next week..."

"I've some lemons at home actually, I'm quite partial to a homemade lemonade. I've been trying Dr Trotts waist cinching workout? I started last week, I've noticed a change and I can definitely feel it working. Last night my abdominals were 'ripped', I could barely roll over in bed. This is the start of the new me, a new woman. I'll have them falling at my feet (if I can stand up that is). "

"They won't know what has hit them when we limp into the room with our lemon water"

"Ha ha ha"

"How about one last slice of cake?"

"Lemon drizzle please, with a glass of lemon water"

Author's Note

Feed me with your constructive comments , suggestions and responses. I'm eager to learn.

Reviews

[Major Killer]

Haha.. I know that feel..
Good going.

[Cpt. Alex Rover]

Concept is good, So is the style, just brush up the errors such as (Women should be woman)