Ink House

My Ink House

   Clean and simplistic.

  

    Double space.

    Perfection and courage.

 

    Confusion and ethics.

    Not moral or sound.

    Sweet dreams in nightmares.

   Running behind joggers.

    Thoughts with no logic.

   Long path ability for a short walk.

    Music with unhearing lyrics.

    Sleeping while becoming tired.

   Stress and minimalistic.

 

   White evaporated by black.

    Death filled lives.

    I have cold shivers running on my thin skin. My head is numb, possible cause. Stress. I think of life in such a confusion. Not at all in reality, simply over whelming. Perfectly cold and ethically working. No one could believe how this feeling sits. Falling raw bread.

   Skyscraper explosions. Burning victims go off in my head. Little life is left to ponder over death. Numbness fills my external wall, so much fog. A crystal ball sits on a dusty shelf. Life is useless without persistent happiness.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[AliciaB]

Wow. I must admit, you had my brain turning somersaults with this one. All of the images are highly convoluted (for example, "Music with unhearing lyrics"), but that's what makes this intriguing and gives it layers of meaning. I personally related to the line "Running behind joggers" - I'm a runner, and I understand the feeling of frustration that seems to be represented by this image. Why can't people move any faster? :) I also feel that each of these ideas probably has its own meaning to you, which is difficult for anyone else to understand. It makes the piece quite interesting for those of us trying to pick apart its meaning. For instance, I have absolutely no idea what "Falling raw bread" means. But maybe it's something to do with helplessness, apathy, or even just a weird, random thought. This was quite a mind-bending piece to read. Nice work!

[LeFestinRaven]

Thank you. It is a bit convoluted. Falling raw bread is just an example of how anxiety feels. And I also had a really funny thought of people dropping bread off of skyscrapers while writing. An example of the feeling would be pressure as the raw bread hits the pavement. Another would be wanting to sink into something and disappear. Possibly a combination.

[CassiopiaBlack]

I think its good but I'm still a little confused about it.

[LeFestinRaven]

Ink House is just a bunch of stored thoughts. People sometimes put them down on paper and most of the time they don't make sense.