Feelings

Destroys all receptors to common sense.

    This, something that helps you but at the same time destroys you,

    Makes you strong, and weak.

    What more can the mind take with that.

    Destroying the mind slowly, the body right after.

    You can change mood as fast as you got it.

    It can make the most respectable men and women change in a heartbeat.

    It is like a drug for the brain.

    It makes like harder than it needs to be.

    Feelings, determine how people do things every day.

    Makes life's hard decisions even harder to deal with.

    Side effects,

    Heart break,

    Tears,

    Pain,

    Struggle,

    Mind destruction,

    Body destruction,

    All around issues.

    Have fun trying to get around them, good luck.

    The body and mind can only take as much as you let it, Feelings, one thing I wish I never had.

Author's Note

Some things you can't control. The body controls it for you. Yet, not well enough.

Reviews

[koty bell]

This was so true... Awesome poem .....#props#:-)

[Sadie Maisonet]

Thank you, I appreciate it.

[ron]

It makes "like" harder than it needs to be.
Sholud be "life" or I have I made a mistake?

[Sadie Maisonet]

oh, it is life. Damn computer.

[ron]

Lol. I didnt think you would have made an error like that Im so happy I could help.

[Sadie Maisonet]

Thank you, I will be more conscious.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I think you should be a psychologist if you are not one already...Thank you for sharing all this truth...:)

[Sadie Maisonet]

I'm pretty sure I am, without a degree. haha, Your welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome...:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Makes life's hard decisions even harder to deal with.
Side effects,
Heart break,
Tears,
Pain,
Struggle,
Mind destruction,
Body destruction,
All around issues.

This is the pivotal moment of the verse to me...as a reader you lay it all out in that string of words...

[Sadie Maisonet]

Thank you, I try my hardest to do it correctly. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

U r welcome...glad to have come to read this...