Love, My Love!

Love, My Love!

A Chapter by Saddam

Love, My Love;
  You are inside me
A gift of God
  You just lighten me.


© 2017 Saddam


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Superb, short piece. Thoughts come to life in words spoken, to the point made to the other one one's in love with. It's with such a powerful beauty. Love it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Really nice, direct and short. Everybody knows what you mean and everybody needs it may we all be enlightened by the Universe :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


short, sweet, perfect!
thumbs up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the rhyming in this poem. Very short to the point.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very nice use of words and thoughts. I liked the hopeful feel of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short and sweet. Hope to see you write more...:).................

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear Friend. Nice to see you again at my page. Thank you.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. Glad to see you again. ...:::)))
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. Glad to see you again. ...:::)))
A concise piece of beautiful faith :) Light and powerful, both at the same time...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear for your warm words.

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