Love, My Love!
A Chapter by
Saddam
Love, My Love; You are inside me
A gift of God
You just lighten me.
© 2017 Saddam
Reviews
Superb, short piece. Thoughts come to life in words spoken, to the point made to the other one one's in love with. It's with such a powerful beauty. Love it!
Posted 2 Years Ago
Really nice, direct and short. Everybody knows what you mean and everybody needs it may we all be enlightened by the Universe :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
Really nice, direct and short. Everybody knows what you mean and everybody needs it may we all be enlightened by the Universe :)
short, sweet, perfect!
thumbs up!
Posted 7 Years Ago
short, sweet, perfect!
thumbs up!
I love the rhyming in this poem. Very short to the point.
Posted 7 Years Ago
I love the rhyming in this poem. Very short to the point.
Very nice use of words and thoughts. I liked the hopeful feel of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
Very nice use of words and thoughts. I liked the hopeful feel of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Short and sweet. Hope to see you write more...:).................
Posted 7 Years Ago
Short and sweet. Hope to see you write more...:).................
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thanks a lot dear Friend. Nice to see you again at my page. Thank you.
7 Years Ago
You are welcome. Glad to see you again. ...:::)))
7 Years Ago
You are welcome. Glad to see you again. ...:::)))
A concise piece of beautiful faith :) Light and powerful, both at the same time...
Posted 7 Years Ago
A concise piece of beautiful faith :) Light and powerful, both at the same time...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear for your warm words.
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Added on May 28, 2017
Last Updated on May 28, 2017
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Saddam RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India
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I am from India,
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