Half Baked Heart

A fight between heart and desire

Second step 

Towards me; naked 

With a heart of half baked 

Want to do it 

But afraid too. 

She want me 

But love him so much 

She is about to reach 

Yet, don't want it

Other side; want to do. 

Come, I Love You 

I never do it without you 

You are my love 

I know what I have to deserve 

So, listen your heart 

Don't come up in part.

Reviews

[Kim]

I like the message you're conveying. The uncertainty and hesitation is well shown. I also like the contrast between the two personalities in your poem; one is torn, uncertain of what to do or what she wants, the other knows not only what is desired but also what is deserved. Well done! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful my friend, love the title :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Ruth]

Our heart must back our actions 100 % for us to feel whole...subtle yet poignant poem...