THE GHOST OF HEARTS

THE GHOST OF HEARTS

15/04/2015

The ghost of all heart

It intimated by born

Dare or devil; known by act

Acts which affect the world.

It creeps into all hearts, unknown

Behold; contaminating even the purest of soul

Carving into our every bone

It leaves the deepest holes.

An ennui sombre our mind

It captures the entire good epoch

Embedded the good will and disinclined

The dark-saga which was not approach.

 By saddam husen

14/10/2015

©2015saddamhusen

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

"It creeps into all hearts, unknown
Behold; contaminating even the purest of soul
Carving into our every bone
It leaves the deepest holes...." fear and regret can always do that to someone, you described thses feeling well. Nice work

[CA Anurag Sharma]

So very well written... its one of your best for sure.... great work....

[-Scribe in Style-]

Love the assonance my friend! Very aptly expresses the actions and where they are placed.
Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem that has actually made me stop and think!
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[Kim]

I really like it! It's a beautiful way of describing how every action reflects and defines who a person is and that that goes for everybody!

[Lyndy]

I like your poem. It's well composed. :D

[Ruth]

Awesome...darkness can find any good heart, anytime...powerful Saddam...

[Avinash]

Fear has many colors and it lures the mind of the vulnerable. A brilliant write my friend.

[zaisham9393]

Very well written :)
thank u for sharing :)!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Haunting qualities echoes with your words
Our surroundings hold a bearing on our lives
your message is clear here.

[Anamika]

Beautiful words, I like they way it makes me imagines things.. Good Job!