An Untold Story

An Untold Story

It was thrust of thirty years

For such a long period he never desires

But now, when he had passed half life

Raising his untold story;

He is twice of her age

But want to make it, a bond

She had denied but knows him closely

Soft hearted, loving and careful.

 

She wanted it too, but has fear of society

The man; never gave her happiness

Here she is happy and feel comfortable

Other side, he spends his time for money.

 

 One day she dares to accept it

Things change so quickly, not in fare

But she stands strongly for a reason

Both were at a line of fire but combined

They face many minds of society

But they were happy for each other

After a period, they won

And now they are writing own story.

By saddam husen

16/08/2015

Author's Note

Inspired with the movie "Nihshabd"

Reviews

[Naina]

Wow.. that's so nicely written Saddam.. It perfectly describes the mental state of two people who are in love but because of their age differences they feared to be together.. This is reality, our society never accepts such things.. But am happy that you give such a nice ending to this poem.. great work.. Keep writing..:)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.... Much appreciating your vision.
Thanks for reading it.

[Naina]

my pleasure.....:))

[Ana B.]

oh this is very beautiful and inifinitely tender my dear :) Splendid write.

[Ruth]

Societies labels and damnation can not stop love if it is true and reciprocated...love is a force unto itself and finds a way...poignant piece Saddam...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful, poignant and direct.
I have seen the movie and your piece delivered justice to it.
Keep up the good work!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much so dear.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Writing their own story is a wonderful way to put it!
Different things inspire us in life to write our feelings down and show our emotions through our stories.
Love has no laws ~ if it is true.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.
Yes, Love has no rule and laws if it is true.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[TheOne&Only]

Loved it! It touched me...the love..it touched me. Thanks for sharing!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. Appreciated every word.