The People

It was journey from one city to town

Train was running with passengers uncount

There were lots of people

The people who make country by tongue

The people who are future leader

The people who carried the worlds on shoulders

But can not bear two inches ticket of Rs 10.

Author's Note

The people who carried the worlds on shoulders
But can not bear two inches ticket of Rs 10.

Reviews

[Johnson]

good one,wise words of knowledge and filled with all amount of truth

[Chirag Kumar]

Thats true Saddam. Reflects the reality of our cities. Loved it :)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot friend...

[Mitali Shah]

well penned observation of urban city

[Chris]

Though your closest companion is hunger
and the sounds in your dark nights have teeth,
though each day's heat is NOT friendly
and the sun's shade already grasps our bodies,
though our lips can't even form a plea
to a god that seems to have forgotten we exist...
I will not forget you lived ...my brother, my friend.

Chris

[guy drori]

Nicely observed... short, yet the message was very clear.

[Sami Khalil]

A very good observation. You write with insights...:).......

[Ruth]

Life never stops turning the mayhem and bussle of modern day society, poignant observation...

[Ana B.]

A surpsingly sharp insight into the heart of the matter. It's easiest to get carried away in cities.....

[Lotus Twilight]

@saddam, you have presented a realistic portrait of urban mentality. Commendable!