The People

It was journey from one city to town

Train was running with passengers uncount

There were lots of people

The people who make country by tongue

The people who are future leader

The people who carried the worlds on shoulders

But can not bear two inches ticket of Rs 10.

Author's Note

The people who carried the worlds on shoulders
But can not bear two inches ticket of Rs 10.

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

I wish everyone would notice such simple things! Sometimes the only way we can expect our message to get out is through writing ourselves...

[Dhaye]

Yes, we are good in telling we are responsible enough, but the truth is we are still escaping from certain roles we actually have to do.

Short but profound.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear that you feel so....

[Avinash]

This is ridiculous to see how people steal from their own property and tell children not to do so.
It kind of surprises that the same people have different opinions on lot of other things and without having any opinion our own misbehavior of the ticketless travel.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much friend.
Your thoughts are so pure and honest.

[Kousika]

Nice poem.. The lines are short yet conveys a deeper meaning. It tells how rushed we are, it tells we live in this fast moving world.. Good work.. Keep it up!!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Observing our surroundings and reflecting on our experiences with true feelings.
How is our world bringing bearing to lives in it?

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[costa siwale]

a good write my friend, such powerful allegory

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend.......Much Appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

"The people who are future leader
The people who carried the worlds on shoulders"

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome,sir. ....:)........

[sonnie ibadah]

an honest insight to the reality behind the truth, i love the simplicity of the words that carry so much meaning.

[AaronFreitas]

I love your words and thoughts Saddam :) Always a pleasure to read your work :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

good Satire...yea some people worry so much about the rising corruption n all but forget that their conduct counts too... good one :)