YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

 

Awara, I am

But I am loyal

Into your love

For dreams, we have dreamt.

Banjara, I am

But I am sensible

For our bonds

Promises, we have made.

Deewana, I am

But I am passionate

About our relationship

I want to build happiness extreme.

No matter what the world saying

But I am complete with you.

 

SADDAM HUSEN

06/06/2015

©saddamhusen2015

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

What a way to express your feelings for your love...Absolutely stunning!

[Saddam]

So much pleased hear that friend.
I'm so happy that you like it.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend

[Matching Socks]

Lovely poem Saddam. No one else can decide for you who your heart should belong to.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.
I'm glad you find it lovely.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write! To find that right person that makes you feel complete... nice work :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.
Glad you like it.

[Sami Khalil]

"But I am passionate
About our relationship
I want to build happiness extreme."

You have summed it up marvelously in those lines. You share your heart and soul in this lovely, lovely write...:)..........

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir, I'm honored with your words.
Thanks for reading and reviewing it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir.....:).....

[costa siwale]

superb piece Saddam, i like its subtlety and i like your work