TWO VIEWS

I

Tell me, what’s on in our society?

Which community stand fast for anyone?

Who has embellished or what make her proudy

They have an eye, not for praise but criticism.

They just don’t care who has ruined;

They feel entertainment on this unfortunation.

II

When in our heart the fire of melice burnt

A big part of our world destroyed

Lifestyle, culture, dynasty, grandiosity existent

And the other entire thing affected by it.

When a brother took a sword for estrangement

The whole race lament at his decision.

By saddam husen

09/05/2015

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The title should be: Two Views since it is plural and plus correcting few other grammatical ones. Other than that, the poem and the ideas are great...:)..

[costa siwale]

Good piece of writing. Well done

[AaronFreitas]

Nice write my friend. Loved the questions posed in this write. Good work!

[prajakta]

true...loved the language..

[Saddam]

Thank you so much so much dear..

[MsJewel]

There is power and emotion in your words. A well written and thought provoking poem. Great writing!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you so much sweet friend.